a way too long review most people wont read
if your going to make a tutorial about how to do something its important that you demonstrate your ability to do it well before the person starts the tutorial...and im sorry but you crappy "begin" where you have to click specifically on one of the letters does not qualify as demonstrating the ability to make a good button...in fact its quite the opposite...if its you first tutorial you should take the extra time and care to make sure its done well. especially when you know its been done before and been done better...usually the only way to compete with something that's been done before many times is to do it better or at least on the same level. usually watching other tutorials helps on figuring out what things are helpful and good to have with a tutorial and whats not. examples would be screen shots,easy to read font and color, etc. also its not a good idea to make a tutorial on something you just learned. there's so much more to button making such as hit area,over and what these mean and do. like someone below said a remake of this after you've improved would do it wonders. And if you do understand more about button making then your tutorial shows then even more reason to remake it. i know its a "tutorial for noobs" but that doesn't mean after the basic explanation you cant have a more advanced section after the basic instruction. hopefully some of my pointless rambling made sense and is a bit helpful. ofc if you just felt like making a half assed tutorial out of boredom then disregard most of my review. But i hope that's not the case. Good luck on future endeavors in flash
well I thought it was funny
i never heard the song before but was a good song and i thought this was pretty funny and thats what the song sounded like to me, and i hope its being misheard or else that's a REALLY weird song...xD anyway the animation wasn't great but you said it was an after thought and it wasn't about the animatoin so i wont let that effect my rating very much. anyway i liked it =) 8/10 4/5.
Your review is proof that, 100 people have 100 different opinions.
I am glad you enjoyed it. :)
after rewatching this a few times i decided to do a review =). this was awesome on so many levels. it was the little touches here and there that made it great. 10/10. As a yuri fan, if the kissing scene between konata and kagami lasted a couple minuets longer i would have argued with newgrounds to let me give it a 12/10 xD.
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